Thursday, September 6, 2018
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Kia ora, My name is Hamish from marshland school. Ben, i really like your spaceship drawing. Where is the spaceship going? Maybe next time you could put orange lightning bolts inside the red ones to make the spaceship look like it is going really fast. I also love your writing. This sort of writing is very nice for a year four because i am a year six and i don’t have that sort of amazing writing!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for the advice, I might do another Spaceship Drawing with your ideas. From Ben
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